[sv-bc] MERGE REVIEW draft 2: Chapter 22

From: Brad Pierce <Brad.Pierce_at_.....>
Date: Tue Apr 03 2007 - 15:43:48 PDT
22 "The formal syntax for a module definitions" --> "The formal syntax
for a module definition"

22.1 "or and entire complex digital system." --> or an entire complex
digital system."

22.1 "can represent functional" ??

22.1 "detail levels" ??

22.1.1 "The port directions and sizes of the module" vs. "The type of
data passed through each port"  Isn't the size of a port an aspect of
its type?

22.1.3 "Port declarations can be based on parameter declarations. The
parameter type of parameters can be redefined for each instance of a
module, providing a means of customizing the characteristics of each
instance of a module."  OK, but it's not possible for the
characteristics of the instances in an array of instances to differ from
each other, is it?  I think they can only be customized in bulk.

22.2 "A module can be used (instantiated) in two ways"  Could we choose
'used' or 'instantiated' and get rid of the parenthetical comment?

22.2.2 "is used illustrate" --> "is used to illustrate"

22.2.2.2 "of a module call A is illegal"  --> "of a module called A are
illegal"  or better  --> "are illegal"

 

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